Monday 11 February 2008

Ammendments!!!

Hey guys, I have completed the feedback given on the image restoration. here is the the result of this. Also please take time to view and comment on my uploaded website located at http://www.j-browne.co.uk/back-to-basics

Thanks.



7 comments:

Marc Pugh said...

I still don't think the body skin colour is right just yet. The guy on the right looks yellow. The skin is one of the hardest parts to get right, and probably one of the most important ones to get right as well.

The man in the middle need some more work on his left side. The folds in his jacket haven't been restored, you can see this by looking at his right side.

The same goes for the man on the right. His left side also seems damaged still. Its hard work to get things perfect.

Looking good so far though

John Browne said...

Thanks Marc, I have ammended to the best of my ability and have uploaded the newer version..

feel free to comment again.

Tom Smith said...

JB,

A couple of thing about your website:

1) I don't think having a splash screen is a good idea. Steve has made his dislike of these clear many times and I don't think it'll go down too well.

2) For the Javascript, you need to make it a bit clearer- at the moment if you don't fill in a text box, the message that comes up says 'textfield 2 is required' or similar. Which one is textfield 2? You need to make it so it says 'Last Name is required' or something similar.

Other than that, the site's working well. Good job!

Mark Torrington said...

JB a few more points:

1. Visually the splash page image is more exciting than the header of your site, the only thing they have in relationship appears to be the subject matter. You might want to consider merging the styles a little, either by introducing the colours yellow and blue into your splash page or keeping the name ‘basicomputing’.

2. Considering you have not used Photoshop for a long time. I am impressed with your efforts as the Image restoration is really coming together. As a final touch you could restore the colour levels by using adjustment levels or curves. Why don’t they have any hair colour?

Webomatic said...

Hi

i must say a lot better this time round, the skin colour looks perfect, however have you added any colour to the hair or are you leaving it gray. I think the first guy's hair looks better brown but thats my opinion.

John Browne said...

To be completely honest, only the middle guy has no hair colour as I feel he doesn't need it. The guy on the left has a rather low opacity brown, and the guy on right has a low opacity black.

Thanks for the feedback on the website guys. Perhaps I should clear away the splash screen and replace it with another an appointed index with a link and a picture to each section.

On a personal matter I dislike my links completely and would like to change them. Any one agree??? This could go in to beedback and ammendments and is also another oportunity to keep them blog comments rolling...

John Browne said...

beedback.....feedback...