Yeah I was going to point out the spelling, as well as the capital 'W' missing from Wakefield.
On the Tina May one, why is the alignment different for the title than for the rest of the text? I'm not sure this conforms to the C.R.A.P. principles.
Jonathan Gee; I really like the design just a couple of things; can you bring the image down slightly so there is more hairline. That way it will repeat the negative space at the bottom of the image. I would also bring the text down slightly so there isn't too much negative space.
Tina May; Nice simple layout, I'd just have a play around with the placing of the text. Have you tried moving 'Tina May' in line with the image's eyes? Equally, there may be a little too much space between the top and bottom text?
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I prefer the Johnathan Gee one of the two, although you should check your spelling on both banners!
Thanks Sue, Drew actualy pointed that one out on MSN also.....
Yeah I was going to point out the spelling, as well as the capital 'W' missing from Wakefield.
On the Tina May one, why is the alignment different for the title than for the rest of the text? I'm not sure this conforms to the C.R.A.P. principles.
Ammendments made people. Any other suggestions???
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Jonathan Gee; I really like the design just a couple of things; can you bring the image down slightly so there is more hairline. That way it will repeat the negative space at the bottom of the image. I would also bring the text down slightly so there isn't too much negative space.
Tina May; Nice simple layout, I'd just have a play around with the placing of the text. Have you tried moving 'Tina May' in line with the image's eyes? Equally, there may be a little too much space between the top and bottom text?
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